The Deep
As I sink
I think, why even try?
Will the world remember me?
Will my friends and family cry?
If I die, will I be remembered?
I see the light fading as I go farther into the deep
The shadows start creeping in on me
And I ponder the thought of eternal sleep
Will it be quick and painless?
Will I cry out when I finally lose all my oxygen?
Or will I accept it, like a lover's caress?
Perhaps I’ll just slip into unconsciousness…
And then I remember your face
As I sink lower into the abyss
Will I die a disgrace?
Will I forever rest in the deep?
I will not be a has been
I look up and see a point of light
I gathered all my strength from within
With I mighty push I reach for the surface
I will not die in the deep
I will not die a coward
I will not choose this eternal sleep
I’m coming back
©2008-2009 ~djsoblivion1990
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I made this for a monthly challenge at the Corrupted Carousel.
Anyways when I started writing this out I was for sure she was going to drown.. but it seems my muses decided otherwise. XD
Anyways when I started writing this out I was for sure she was going to drown.. but it seems my muses decided otherwise. XD
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I don't ask you to agree, all I ask is that you listen to a view other than your own.
I also take commissions!
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~||> I suffer in Silence <||~
"I guess it wasn't much of a god if it could be killed by a human being." ~Heather from SH3
I'm glad you feel hope from it, not sure I like that you feel how she does, but meh oh well, whatever works for ya bro!
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~||> I suffer in Silence <||~
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